23 de agosto de 2007

the second letter

Dear, Fernández


The weight up is a common problem in the young women; because many people have different problems that occasioning weight up, but is necessary to know the causes of this problem because I have different solutions; for this reason, I can help them with many situations.

The first young’s problem is about the stress; this problem is produced for different circumstances such as the study, friends, and relationships. These problems involve the young people, when they begin to weight up. If you have stress, I recommend to go to practice yoga and in general, curses where you can relax.

The second point about the weight up is the bad physic activities, this problem is common in the young people too, because nowadays many people around in the word prefer watch TV, listen music or play video games, these activities produced weight up quickly because their are sit down all time; if you have not physical activity, the solution would be to go to gym or practice running every mornings.

The final point is about your nutritive costumes, for example the teenagers eat hamburgers, pizza, and bad drinks such as coca kola, Pepsi, and others similar beers, this food is very bad for your body, however this problem have solution too, in this case if you suffer it you need to eat others nutritive products for example: vegetables, fruits, cereal etc, for this reason is very necessary that you begin now.

I will hope that my advice help you.

Cordially
Liliana Reyes

1 comentario:

Angela Forero: English Teacher dijo...

Very nice letter, you go deeper in the details and expand your ideas.

Just take these few suggestions into account:

* weight up: gain weight
* "for" is not a connector to mean "para". Remember "in order to," "so that," "because."
"I hope my advice helps you."